Poem Analysis: IF WE MUST DIE By Claude McKay
If we must die, let it not be like
hogs
Hunted and penned in an inglorious
spot.
While round us bark the mad and
angry dogs
Making their mock at our accursed
lot
If we must die, o let us nobly die
So that our precious blood may not
be shed
In vain; then the monsters we defy
Shall be constrained to honor us
though dead.
O kinsmen! We must meet our common
foe
Though far outnumbered. Let us show
us brave
And for their thousand blows, deal
one death blow
What though before us lies the open
grave?
Like men we’ll face the murderous
cowardly pack
Pressed to the wall dying but
fighting back.
INTRODUCTION
Claude McKay was born in 1890 in
Jamaica. He went to Kansas to study agriculture at the time when Ku Klux Klan
was highly active. He was therefore forced to move to New York in 1914. In 1919
Washington DC newspaper gave stories of an alleged (suspected) sexual assault
that was said to be committed by an African American. The stories sparked
(caused) a series of twenty riots during the summer of 1919, beginning with
white lynch mob (murderous group) that targeted blacks in Washington. There
were 28 public lynchings (killings) in the first half of the year and the
following summer and fall came to be known as “The Red Summer” of 1919. This was the motivation behind McKay’s “If We Must Die”
He wrote the poem amid the violence
and bloodshed of 1919, and in this poem he encourages his community to take
action and fight back.
STRUCTURAL ANALYSIS
a) What type of the poem is this?
It is a sonnet. It is made up of
only one stanza with 14 verses.
b) Comment on the rhyming scheme.
The poem has a regular rhyming
scheme that goes;
ABAB CDCD EFEF GG.
c) What is the tone of the poem/poet?
The tone is serious and angry
d) Who is the persona? How do you know?
The persona is a black American who
is oppressed, humiliated and persecuted. We know this from the history of the
poet and the fact that blacks were hunted, penned (locked in small cells) and
killed like hogs (pigs) in America.
If we must die, let it not be like hogs
Hunted and penned in an inglorious spot.
While round us bark the mad and angry dogs
e) What sufferings does the person
experience?
They are hunted (arrested), penned
(locked in small cells) with angry and mad dog guarding them and are sometimes
killed without fair trial.
f) Is the persona afraid of death? Give
reasons to justify your answer.
The persona is surely not afraid of
death. The reasons for this are;
o
When you die fighting people will
honor you. i.e. it is noble to die fighting. “let us nobly die”
o
Whether he fights or not, he is
bound to die someday. “What though before
us lies an open grave?”
g) Comment on the figures of speech and
poetic devices
i. Rhetorical question
o
What though before us lies an open grave?”
ii. Metaphor
He compares the enemy/oppressors
with the monsters. ‘The monsters we defy’
iii. Images
The poet paints the pictures of;
Hogs
(pigs) = pigs are killed mercilessly so they should not die the same death.
Mad and angry dogs = this is
the picture of the oppressor who guards the Blacks not to escape from
punishment.
iv. Symbolism
“An Open grave” this symbolizes death.
Which is to say whether we fight or not death is there waiting for us. Death is the ultimate finality of
human life.
‘Blood” is
a symbol for sacrifice
v. Repetition
The phrase “if we must die” is repeated for emphasis
vi. Hyperbole.
“For their thousand blows”
vii. Satire/Irony
The poet mocks both the enemy and
himself.
“Like men we’ll face the murderous cowardly pack.” He mocks the oppressor that he is
coward like a group of wolves. But how can someone coward press you to the wall
dying. He shows that he is himself weak/inferior to the enemy. Also shows that
the enemy is capable of dealing a thousand death blows but he can deal only
one.
h) The poet calls his enemy “the murderous cowardly pack” what does
that mean?
A pack is a group of dogs or wolves
hunting together. He compares the oppressors as a cowardly pack because the
Whites were hunting Africans in notorious mobs and not individually. This shows
that they were coward as well.
i) To whom is the speaker talking?
The speaker calls for action from
his fellow kinsmen (the oppressed) or more specifically Black-Americans.
j) Is the poem relevant today?
The poem is still relevant because
it instills the sense of awareness, sacrifice and determination when it comes
to fighting for our rights. Also it is very true that those who died fighting
during this period of racial injustice in America are honored until now in the
history of America. Think of Martin Luther King Jr, and Malcolm X.
THEMATIC ANALYSIS
SACRIFICE
In the fight against oppression,
sacrifice is a valuable commodity. Few People need to sacrifice their lives so
that the majority may live in peace. In this poem the poet (McKay) calls for
actions against the enemy (foe). However, he shows that the struggle may mean
death. But if they must die, it is better to die fighting so that they may be
honored later than dying while doing nothing.
He says
If we must die, o let us nobly die
So that our precious blood may not be shed
In vain! …
HUMILIATION/TORTURE/OPPRESSION
The poet and his fellow kinsmen go
through a series of torture and mistreatment from their enemy. They are
arrested with no reason, jailed and killed like pigs. This is a situation which
affected most African American in the time of racial injustice in America and
when “Jim Crow laws” were in effect.
The poet shows the experience they are going through by saying;
If we must die, let it not be like hogs
Hunted and penned in an inglorious spot.
While round us bark the mad and angry dogs
MOTALITY (DEATH)
Due to this politically charged
situation death at least seems the best thing to help a person sort out what is
important in life. The speaker speaks about death in a more practical sense -
he is actually facing it. It is not the question of whether he will die or what
will happen when he dies it is about how he will meet death. To him death is an
opportunity to show strength, nobility and purpose.
If we must die, o let us nobly die
So that our precious blood may not be shed
In vain; then the monsters we defy
Shall be constrained to honor us though dead.
